I can't stand the writing style. I read 4 chapters and I really tried but I just can't get past it. I don't know what's going on half the time because of the choppy sentences and the dialogue is killing me. I've read a couple of books read in dialect that I liked and this isn't even really dialect but it is enough to annoy me. BOOOOO. Lyn and I are going to start doing a DNF roundup on the blog and this will probably go in that at some point. Stay tuned.