Book of Shadows / The Coven / Blood Witch (Sweep Series #1, #2, & #3)

Sweep: Volume 1 - Cate Tiernan DNF. I can't with this book. The writing is amateurish. All telling. She tells me how much she likes this guy but there is zero chemistry because there is no development. No atmosphere. Zero description. Screwed up subject verb agreement. Bad writing. I feel bad because I loved Balefire. But this is just plain awful. Was it her first book?